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Fallen
Jul 24, 2007 14:43:40 GMT -5
Post by Fallen on Jul 24, 2007 14:43:40 GMT -5
Character name Fallen
Gender She-wolf
Age 2 1/2 years
History Fallen was born on the day when their worst rival pack had fallen to her packs fangs. She was named after the day of their victory, "The Fall of the Great Rock Valley". She was the strongest of her litter and the most intellegent of the females. She was destined to be the next leader. But then she fell in love. With Tain, a young male from the Great Rock Valley Pack. Her sister, Sickle found out and told their father. Sickle was always jealous of her sisters greatness. She was always looking to get her in trouble. Tain was the perfect way. After Fallen found out that Tain had died at her fathers fangs, she attacked her sister, for she knew it was her fault. She was banished from her pack and she left willingly. She lives lone wolf. But she doesn't want to be alone any longer. She still wants to fall in love and she still wants to have a mate.
Example post A whistle rang through the air. Black ears perked. Pale amber eyes flickered. Fallen looked around. She saw a small bird rocket through the air. The black wolfess stared after it, unaware of the danger she was in. A twig snapped. Fallen swung her head around and she caught sight of two green eyes glaring at her. "Greetings my sister." A jet black wolf stepped out of the shadows, less black then the wolf before her. Fallen narrowed her eyes at Sickle. "Is something wrong my sister." Sickle smirked. "Yes. I'm sorry to say, but a wolf from our rival pack has fallen to the teeth of father." Soemthing inside Fallen slid. "A young male by the name of... Tain." Fallen let out a tiny gasp. She clenched her teeth and glared at her sister. Sickle had an evil grin painted on her face. "This was and interesting set you had there sister. Falling in love with a wolf from our rival pack. You really are pathetic." Fallen hung her head, tears filling her eyes. Sickle dropped the evil smirk and gave an anger snarl. "You know very well that wolves like Thor fancy you. Wolves in our pack. You chose wrongly Fallen." Without warning, Fallen leaped at Sickle, sinking her teeth into her sister's neck. The dark gray wolf snarled and clawed at Fallens belly. "You are no longer part of this pack Fallen!" The black wolfess tore her fangs down Sickles neck. "I don't care Sickle! I say good ridance!" Sickle threw her sister off and bashed her skull into her sisters. Fallen fell back, a gash in her forehead. When she lifted her head, Sickle was gone. The wolfess closed her eyes tightely together. "Tain..." Then she leaped to her paws and bounded away, far from her pack territory.
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Fallen
Jul 28, 2007 12:43:26 GMT -5
Post by Darius on Jul 28, 2007 12:43:26 GMT -5
In the rules, it specificaly states that your posts must be 500 words or more. I'll accept you anyway, But please watch your post length, in the future. Thanks.
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